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Critiques
The details that you put into her dress look well, and the flow of rose petals from the hair piece looks good.
One of teh things that I noticed though is that her left arm (right from our view) looks a little awkward. It seems as if it it pointing out too much. With her arm sticking out, it creates an awkward positioning for her hand. If you were to draw her left arm pointing more down by her side, instead of out, it would make it look less like she's struggling to hold the violin. If you were to position her arm and elbow a below the violin, instead of outside, it would flow.
As for the details, they are very well done. Her lipstick shines beautifully and her eyes show both focus as well as some sorrow. Her hair is well done, although it seems as if the bottom part of her hair could use more color depth. Where her bangs are, I'm noticing that her bangs seem to be more shaded than the rest of her hair. If you were to keep the flow of shading up throughout the rest of her her, she would stand out even more.
Again, overall it is a very wonderful deviation that is heartfelt. I truly enjoyed viewing this piece.
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