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“Strings are playing, hear them saying,
“Love me true”.
Now the echo answers,
“Say you want me too”.
All the world’s in love with love
And I love you.”

The Merry Widow Waltz - The Merry Widow (movie)


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I wanted to paint a violin, and a girl, it was when i was giving it color that i decided to make her dress black, and choose all the other colors ;P

The pose was taken by a referencial picture, i'm not sure if the perspective is right...

Anyway i really like the colors, the petals, her eyes and lips.

I hope you like it :blowkiss:

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Critiques


:iconnyiana-sama:
First off, let me say that this is a very beautiful deviation, and it feels very heart felt. Overall the composition of this deviation is wonderful, and the character stands out well. There is a somberness in this deviation that makes it also touching.

The details that you put into her dress look well, and the flow of rose petals from the hair piece looks good.

One of teh things that I noticed though is that her left arm (right from our view) looks a little awkward. It seems as if it it pointing out too much. With her arm sticking out, it creates an awkward positioning for her hand. If you were to draw her left arm pointing more down by her side, instead of out, it would make it look less like she's struggling to hold the violin. If you were to position her arm and elbow a below the violin, instead of outside, it would flow.

As for the details, they are very well done. Her lipstick shines beautifully and her eyes show both focus as well as some sorrow. Her hair is well done, although it seems as if the bottom part of her hair could use more color depth. Where her bangs are, I'm noticing that her bangs seem to be more shaded than the rest of her hair. If you were to keep the flow of shading up throughout the rest of her her, she would stand out even more.

Again, overall it is a very wonderful deviation that is heartfelt. I truly enjoyed viewing this piece.
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:iconchichuproductions:
wow. . .really nice. . .

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do you have french fries??
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:iconsmallshinobiingra:
Que lindo! Es super emotivo! Me gusta! ^.^

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+[Strawberry Lips]+
:iconyvaine2010:
Very beautiful! :)

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:iconunseenvision:
This is really beautiful! :heart:

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:iconkattykinns:
I love the rustic colours in this and the texture of the background. The way the petals are smudged gives a great effect almost as if they're floating away with the music like her exxpression which seems to calm yet focused on the music. Her lips are very beautifully done and so are her eyes, prehaps the hair could do with more depth as the fringe looks quite detailed but the curls seem to be lacking.

It's overall a very beautiful drawing though :heart:

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:iconsolrender:
Me gusta la composición de tus dibujos, el manejo de los colores, pero no me gustan tus diseños de personajes.

Aun asi es atractivo.


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:icondarkfer:
Esta muy bello!, me encanta como pintas xD

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:iconvanillathefox:
*Dies* :+fav:

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Killing you in a duel would be to easy... But it might be fun to watch you squirm in aggony! X3
:iconladyraspberry:
Amé los petalos, esta muy bonito.

La expresion de ella es genial :3

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:iconnaham:
Thank you! :heart:

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